My Indignation? My country.
My biggest indignation is the pussy behavior of Chilean people in the last fifty years, and I really mean it. The fact that people are a blind accomplice of many atrocities in our country for many years is unacceptable to me. Not only because nobody did anything to avoid them, but because it would be intrinsic to our culture accept with the head down mistreats and humiliations.We´re very proud of whom we are, of our heroes and our football, but nobody is proud of our bravery, because there is no bravery in Chile. Because even when our country returned to democracy, the president of the time said that “there was justice to the extent possible”.It´s so hard to find someone to admire, but I do not lose hope, I know that better generations will come, brave generations, Passionate generations, and an army of voices thinking outside the box and tell the mighty guys who control everything: fuck you all!

It is really necessary that there be a generational change, that does not allow more abused in all kinds of things, that it does not keep silence and that fight for real changes
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